Whoa! Big left turn there in the middle, but I think it works.

Oh my God, Leanna, this was gorgeous! I loved your Severus. He was absolutely adorable, and Lily was PERFECT. This story was so sweet, and it has such a sad and bitter-sweet quality about it. I know how you feel about the HP fandom being so big and scary, but I ADORED it. I think you wrote this perfectly!

I...I actually read this before...but I didn't want to review it until I had something to give you...^^ *hugs*

I don't like Snape. At all. Yet you somehow made me feel sorry for him...
Keep up the good work!

Wow ,you had me hanging at your every word. The beginning was a bit long, but it's like you get into it better when you write more and more. Especially in the end where Snape is cruelly taken back to the reality as if having a hauntingly beautiful daydream that every now and then comes back to taunt his frail heart. It was very much like the book and the fact that you didn't use the exact words that J. K. Rowling had used where brilliant. So thanks for writing it, because it's a good start and you've got talent for fandom. (Kinda twitched in your head with plot bunnies after reading DH now did it as you've written a Severus/Lily pairing, eh? ;D)