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TwilightLoverGirl13
2009-11-25 . chapter 2
that was good are you going to keep going?
Black-Eyed Scarelet Pimpernel
2009-11-16 . chapter 2
Loving this story to death
I just LOVE Leah/Marcus :D
They are amazing together.
Please, i beg you, update soon.
Sexy_Pimpernel
silenaandbeckendorf4ever
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS SUPER GREAT IDEA
armanifan101
2009-08-24 . chapter 2
Please update. This is an amzing storyline.
I Heart Seth Clearwater
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
love it. its mutual
Lonely Scarecrow
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
OH NOEZ! Why did you stop? DO YOU NOT WANT YOUR COOKIES?! Leah and Marcus are a very interesting pair; I never thought such thing existed! Please update! You know you want your cookies! I KNOW YOU DO! DO NOT DENY IT!
diff-r-ent-1
2009-04-17 . chapter 2
hè, cool story. very interesting. ope you'll update soon
1-800-Jesuslover
2009-03-27 . chapter 2
update plz
Annie
2009-01-09 . chapter 2
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE PLEASE!
Sonneuntergang
2009-01-07 . chapter 2
i like the story.. and i hope you'll update very soon :)
stsword
2008-12-29 . chapter 2
Enjoyed the story.
Je t'aime beaucoup
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
this is a very good story. I can't wait for more! :)

there is something that bothered me, though...
i feel bad saying this, but it just really bothers me when people have mistakes in their writing. even the little things bother me.
so, i thought i'd tell you that towards the end of chapter one, when felix is talking and says, "... there are to many of them..."
there's supposed to be two O's on too.
also, when leah said, "Its you..." you didn't put an apostrophe.

i know, i sound bad saying this, considering i don't capitalize anything!
WhySoSerious1992
2008-11-26 . chapter 2
The bad scent thing is mutual. To a vampire, werewolves smell kinda like wet dog I think. This story is really interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more :)
caww
2008-11-07 . chapter 2
I don't know why I'm so curious of Marcus and Leah 'imprinting' but I am. Please continue your story.
caww
vvvvvvvvvv
2008-10-12 . chapter 2
this story is different and i like it. update soon.
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