 TwilightLoverGirl13 2009-11-25 . chapter 2that was good are you going to keep going? |
 Black-Eyed Scarelet Pimpernel 2009-11-16 . chapter 2Loving this story to death
I just LOVE Leah/Marcus :D
They are amazing together.
Please, i beg you, update soon.
Sexy_Pimpernel |
 silenaandbeckendorf4ever 2009-11-02 . chapter 2PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS SUPER GREAT IDEA |
 armanifan101 2009-08-24 . chapter 2Please update. This is an amzing storyline. |
 I Heart Seth Clearwater 2009-07-22 . chapter 2love it. its mutual |
 Lonely Scarecrow 2009-04-17 . chapter 2OH NOEZ! Why did you stop? DO YOU NOT WANT YOUR COOKIES?! Leah and Marcus are a very interesting pair; I never thought such thing existed! Please update! You know you want your cookies! I KNOW YOU DO! DO NOT DENY IT! |
 diff-r-ent-1 2009-04-17 . chapter 2hè, cool story. very interesting. ope you'll update soon |
 1-800-Jesuslover 2009-03-27 . chapter 2update plz |
 Annie 2009-01-09 . chapter 2 UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE PLEASE! |
 Sonneuntergang 2009-01-07 . chapter 2i like the story.. and i hope you'll update very soon :) |
 stsword 2008-12-29 . chapter 2Enjoyed the story. |
 Je t'aime beaucoup 2008-12-14 . chapter 1this is a very good story. I can't wait for more! :)
there is something that bothered me, though...
i feel bad saying this, but it just really bothers me when people have mistakes in their writing. even the little things bother me.
so, i thought i'd tell you that towards the end of chapter one, when felix is talking and says, "... there are to many of them..."
there's supposed to be two O's on too.
also, when leah said, "Its you..." you didn't put an apostrophe.
i know, i sound bad saying this, considering i don't capitalize anything! |
 WhySoSerious1992 2008-11-26 . chapter 2The bad scent thing is mutual. To a vampire, werewolves smell kinda like wet dog I think. This story is really interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more :) |
 caww 2008-11-07 . chapter 2I don't know why I'm so curious of Marcus and Leah 'imprinting' but I am. Please continue your story.
caww |
 vvvvvvvvvv 2008-10-12 . chapter 2this story is different and i like it. update soon. |