 Little Pastry 2007-09-17 . chapter 2This is a good story, and it has the potential to be great, but the romance is moving a little fast. And Roxas seems just a tad out of character to me, but that's okay. This IS fanfiction we're talking about. A little OOCness isn't that bad. Anyway, I wanna see where this story is going. :3 |