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| jemb 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseYet another unqiue perspective on the song which I'm glad to see - it's amazing how one song can make people feel different things. Having never been in the situation Brennan was in, I can't say how a young girl would feel at being dragged from a home she felt safe in but I'm not sure I entirely agree with her thoughts. I can however appreicate your take on the situation. It was very angsty and tense which fitted well with the song and that's the point of the challenge - to write about how it made you feel and the story it created for you. Thanks for entering! |
| luneress 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuse*cries* that was so sad, but so good. it had great emotion, writen well, and so amazing. i hope you continue writing more to the story. please? |
| SporkGoddess 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAww... she totally needs some comforting from teenaged!Booth. Now that I got that shippy thought of my head, that was really well-done. |
| Mockingbird84 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue this story! Bring in some other elements maybe school and another friend! Excellent job! WRITE MORE PLEASE |
| labsquint 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was an interesting view into the mind of the girl that would become Temperance Brennan. She seem relatively well balanced and happy in this house, but the removal of her from it marks the beginning of her adult tendencies to not believe in God and what Peter called her "emotionally distance". A great take on the song -- I agree, the music implies a feeling of angst and you embodied it nicely with this piece. Good job! |
| bb-4ever 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusewow powerful fic. poor bones. thank god she finally finds a family in her squints and booth. look forwar to other fics from you |