 L1NA3 2009-02-12 . chapter 4Oh wow haha That makes me tear up actually. Its a favorite. It... Just.. Wow...ness.
*tears come down* Dammit. People and their damn good writing skillz. |
 hotbritt5000 2008-05-13 . chapter 4This Is Fantastic MADE ME CRY LOL. Great Job. |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-05-11 . chapter 4Aw, he got out cuz of her. Not that she didn't suspect that's what he'd do. She saw how he was living, when you love...err...care about someone, you generally want what's best for them, even if it means bending the rules to help them find their way. Hehe. Another heart-wrenching chapter that just makes you want to go smack some idiots. Hehe. Update soon!
~Chica~ |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-05-11 . chapter 3It is pretty insane how they've "progressed." I think it's funny that they've come this far. They're two broken up and battered souls that need each other. It's sad and pathetic in some ways but also just so touching you know. I have no idea if that even makes sense. Oh well. Great stuff! Last chapter you've got updated, here I come!
~Chica~ |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-05-11 . chapter 2Death always seems to bring people together. It's sad that only the most inopportune times brings people close. It's sad that Bobby had to die. That Rogue and Pyro both blame themselves. That Rogue held onto the last of his power, life force. That Pyro left and showed up to see him again at his very funeral. Fantastically dramatic. Next one...
~Chica |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2008-05-11 . chapter 1I've finally gotten around to actually reading this. Sorry it took so long. I actually just finished chapter 3 but I figured your writing merits a review for every chapter and came back to review. So this chapter was just all intense emotions and feelings left unsaid. Pretty much sums up Rogue and Pyro if you ask me. Good chapter! Time to review the next!
~Chica~ |
 Pace1818 2008-04-23 . chapter 1keep it up its a good story so what happens next? |
 WickedSoulx 2008-04-08 . chapter 4aww =( |
 FluidDegree 2008-04-05 . chapter 4aw I forgot about this story. But the thing aobut the accomplis made it click. hahaha keep the chaps coming please |
 GabrielsDoubt 2008-04-04 . chapter 4Wow
I have loved every bit of this series. You have done this so well. The slow development of Pyro and Rogue's relationship was put together beautifully. I hope you choose to continue this to another chapter! |
 lvswtht 2008-04-04 . chapter 4Like how you managed to work Remy into the storyline. And I have a feeling that they are going to meet again too. |
 itra 2008-04-03 . chapter 4 took you indeed long enough XD. love the new chapter and can't wait untill the next one |
 FluidDegree 2007-11-04 . chapter 3cool story, I really hope you continue on maybe have him get out and look her up and her leave the new guy for him or something like that I look foward to reading more when you get to write it. |
 coup fatal 2007-10-02 . chapter 3If you end it here I will find you and force you to continue. I love Ryro's to death and hey it could happen. Them finally getting together and being happy. Being normal. Fufilling all the things they wanted to. |
 we-r-the-cure 2007-10-02 . chapter 3*jumps up and down ecstatically* I LOVE this story! It's so incredibly awesome I can barely describe it!!^_^ IloveitIloveitIloveitIloveit...! |