How you wrote it and kept them all just like they are...

Wow.

This was definitely and good piece.

Awesome story. I love it.

M. Pure yum. :-)

already reviewed on LJ but again amazing! your writing is amazing please do continue writing for the M/A dark angel fandom we need you lol

Wow. That was an impressive concept. And I can't really argue with the principle players. Plus, I love that it's for real at the end. Good fic :)

i love it!!

I like!

I loved it, I know it is a one parter but I would love to see this continued...I would love to see a on going series but if that is not possible then maybe in a series of one parters to let us know what happens next. Even if you don't this story was great and I hope to be reading more from you soon.

That was so freaking good. I loved all the ** and the crying. Great storytelling!

please tell me your going to continue this

Whoo, I haven't done this in a long time. I mean review, lol. These days I only read fics of authors I know of. And even if I read an odd fic or two otherwise, I only review if I actually have something good or meaningful to say.

Okay, first. WOW! This is a really good read. I haven't read anything so well-written lately. For a new author in this fandom, I mean. And I haven't read good smut in forever. I thought DA smut was dead. And I mean it. I have not even seen anyone attempt to write DA smut anymore. So the fact that you did a good job of it, it's not vulgar at all, is something of a pleasant surprise. Kudos!

A little bit of criticism. Sorry, but I did not like the way you started off. You don't have to stay true to the canon but the whole Renfro thing didn't come off well. She was shown truly dead on the show, also, that she was actually working for Sandeman, so while she did not have Max's best interests at heart, she wasn't terribly evil either. I would have liked to read as to how she was alive or atleast the reason for her current behaviour. But since that was only a small part of the fic, it was easy to look over it.

Anyway, it's a good heat fic and even though it says complete, I'd love to see you expand on it. And more DA fics from you, of course. Keep up the good job! Thanks!