Very good. I liked the subtle hints of corruption in the police forces.

Your prose is really, really beautiful, and I love the way you wrote Nakamori.

Great follow-up, not as weepy thankfully or I'd have a meltdown and bawl all over the place.

I love this and Psychopompos. They're both very well written. You can convey emotions and imagery with very few words. Be proud, Ms. Brand. ^^ Both fics are now on my favorites list.

aw, how sad