Sounds just like him. Good work. )

Wow. That one actaully made me cry. And that's saying something. It takes a lot to make me cry. Really good story!
Hannah

Very good! Great job! -

its its its so beatifull father and son realitionships choke me up *blows nose* it bring a tear to my eye.*sniff sniff*

Oh, don't worry, Cade. ) I'm forgiving. :D Besides, I've been called worse than what your brother called me, so it's alright.

Cool! Oh and warning...My penname was used by my brother to review one of your other fics...just so ya know It wasn't me...He's been using it to help with some of the writing I'm doing...

Oh wow, that was totally awesome! Wholly and completely Vegeta! Wow, incredible! More! I'm always so impressed with people that can write poetry on these characters that encompasses them so well. This is one of the best!

that was beautiful. Very sad. You could see Vegeta's pain when poor old Trunksie got blasted by the big nasty Cell. *sobs* I remember shouting very loudly 'TRUNKS!' at my tv set :P

-Strife

oh, that was GOOD. and i love the ending; that is so vegeta. :)

This is absolutely fantastic! I love it. I think that seeing Mirai Trunks die at the hands of Cell was a real turning point for Vegeta. His feelings surfaced before he could stop them and the result changed him. Good job. (sorry about not signing in, I just started reading your poem and wanted to put my thoughts down right away)