Aw! So cute!

The heat is too hot... Everone needs a little bit of healpfull hints everyonce in a while... XD I like it. They connect together very nicley and the pitte rpatter of the rain is soothing and i felt like I coul dalmost hear iit in time to what I was reading... Okay, that's a little creepy but still...

Aww.. i read both chapters, and they're so cute! They are also very well written! keep up the good work!

This is really good but it doesn't feel finished. I hope that there is more to come.

Sango is so cute in part one with her peeking!

Lovely story. I think that Miroku would be waiting for Sango to make the first move, his whole character would change quite a bit without the kazaana. I really liked the innocence between the both of them, and the beginning of their relationship. Loved the bit where Sango's watching him in the water, peeping Sango always makes me laugh, I can see her doing that. And speaking as someone who lives in a very humid climate, I'd say you definitely go that hot and sticky feeling down, loved when you added the rain, it really set the mood. Oh and the second part was very cute, especially the last bit with the sweet bean bun and the heat. :)

I liked the pitter patter of the rain and the talk of Sango's pregnancy. One alluding to the other. Nice!

Great story!

Very believable. I liked that you added the first chapter, because I could see how it would be a little hard to follow otherwise. I'm glad you brought up the point that Miroku may be waiting for Sango, because that is how I feel their situation is. Another one from the PoF...

Beautiful story, very nicely done.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Magnificent opener, now I look forwards to seeing that preceeded yet follows.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

This is wonderful, thank you so much! I really enjoyed it. The interactions are totally believable, and I love how you described the settings. I could just imagine how the weather felt, particularly in the second chapter.

oh I love it
really sweet.
miroku scare of sango! cute
and yes it is: entertaining, fluffy, and well-written.
^^