when next chapter?

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
Looking forward to more! :)

GRETA STORY!@

Good work! The only thing that was an issue:
"It’s just that...Charlie never snogs! Anyone! Not even me! Mum, occasionally on the cheek!"
Snogging is the equivalent of passionately making out with a person... I would hope that Charlie would never passionately make-out with his sister or mom!! I think you used the word "snog" as just another word for kiss- but it's far more than that in reality!

aw thats cute x

update soon can't wait for more chapters goodwrk

"That was before we knew where his loyalties lay. I shouldn't have gone there alone."

i'm really sorry i am being so nit-picky... but technically before he "died" he gave all of his memories to harry, and harry knew that he was really on their side before he left the shreiking shack that night. so hermione did infact know where his loyalties lay

although you've got the correct cirle of hell for snape i don't think it would appear as the shreiking shack like he says... if i'm not mistaken there's a different circle of hell that looks like your worst nightmare or w/e... i'm not possitive though, i just recently acquired knowledge of Dante's Inferno and i haven't done too much research. i'm semi hoping there is a class at my college i'll be attending in april b/c i am very intirgued by it.

but anyway, apart from the whole tea recipe thing (that annoys me to be honest as i don't think there is such thing as a recipe for tea... i could be wrong) i really like this story, i was going to wait until the end to review but i had to speak my mind about dante's inferno. sorry if i offend

"I never make tea good. Maybe it's because I'm muggle-born"

i kinda have a problem with this... b/c... what does being muggle born have to do with anything? british people make tea all the time... if she weren't british then maybe that statement would work better but i don't see how her being muggle born has anything to do with her tea making abilities

Love it!

love the story:D

This was great! That's all I really have to say. I really enjoyed this.

what a perfect end to a perfect story

i cant wait to read more. this was a really interesting chapter.

this has been and entertaining and funny story adn im glad i happend upon it great job bye for now

belle