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| xof course im weirdx 2008-02-26 ch 1,  | abuseI like it. It gave me chills. :) |
| Sky Falls 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was done very well. I love the details you added and I think it was portrayed very realistically. The ending was particularly good, making everything seem final in a way. Awesome job! -Sky |
| gare de lyon 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusethat was a bit scary, and a lot sad :( well written though |
| Wrath Of Fire 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNice. A good story all around. While I do not usually think of Gaara as insane, this story could certainly change my mind, if I wasn't so stubborn. (Bah. I hate change. XD) Quite a creepy story to follow. While being a jinchuuriki sounds fun at first, Gaara is a quite nice example that it isn't, and that not all tailed beasts are quite so good to their bodies. I'm looking at you, Kyuubi. A. Just an A. |
| Essyllus 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseSweet. I like the description and the little examples to illustrate Gaara's dreams. Like Temari and Kankurou having a picnic. Maybe one nitpick? The parentheses use near the end was heavier than I would have liked it to be. |