A great story. Very funny.

"Pony decided to join in. “Don’t ya remember, Dal? They’d cornered that old lady in that alley.”

“Dark alley,” Two-Bit embellished, nudging Ponyboy in the side.

“Uh, yeah - that cold, dark alley …”

“It’s July,” Johnny interrupted dryly.

“That humid, dark alley,” Pony recovered without missing a beat."

That is officially one of the funniest things I've read in a VERY long time.

hahaha that was so funny. another one of two-bit's crazy tales.

Wow, that was hilarious. I can just imagine what Dallas is thinking right then...lordy. You should do a shot of his thinking, and just warn us all what it's gonna sound like. I think we've got two dead greasers on our hands. I love this story and Come Down From Your Fences. Update that one soon!

Omg, hilarious! You should have included Dally's thoughts throughout this storytelling session...then again, if you did that you'd have to up the rating by about ten thousand points. :P Good end. And good middle, good beginning too. Good author - that's you! :)

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! damn, thats funny. i can SO imagine all this n it jus makes me laugh harder. nice job! =D

lol, nice one, Kung-Fu Dal!

LMFAO!! That was brilliant! I love it! I probably laughed as hard as Ponyboy when Two-Bit mentioned the Kung-Fu.

Even if it wasn't another update, I loved it anyway. It'll hold me over until the real thing.

Haha, I loved this! I just love the way you write Two-Bit, it's so perfect.

And this is probably becoming unanimous, but I think that this was my favorite part, too:

“Uh, yeah - that cold, dark alley …”
“It’s July,” Johnny interrupted dryly.
“That humid, dark alley,” Pony recovered without missing a beat.

That was so great, lol. Fantastic job! I loved this. :)

LMAO, this was funny!!

This was so fantastic! I can picture the whole scenario in my head all too easily.

“Uh, yeah - that cold, dark alley …”

“It’s July,” Johnny interrupted dryly.

“That humid, dark alley,” Pony recovered without missing a beat. “The air was so thick you could cut it with --”

My favorite part of the whole thing.

well, that was amusing...nice job...

LOL Gotta love Two-bit, really you, you just have to :P Awesome job.

a good one

LOL amazingly hilarious. Love this one-shot, and love Come Down From Your Fences. Good job.