i have a feeling loki was behind the failed 3 dates b/c loki wants mayura all 2 himself
LOKIXMAYURA 4EVER!

I love it. I can totally see Loki futzing with Mayura's dates like that, he certainly is a possessive individual, isn't he? I loved the way it ended, too, with the peach ice cream. Poor Mayura, no idea that there's a god in the background messing with her love life.

aw... so sweet! I like it^^ Nice work~

HAhAHAHH!! thats so funny, loki was the cause of all Mayura's dates, a little jealous much, eh?

Wonderful! Great story. It definately brought a smile to face. Now I just wish there was a second chapter on how That date actually went. *mischievous grin* One can only imagine.

Aw, It's so cute! Loki's so devious! But what do you expect for a Trickster God? Good story!

Half of me wants to scream sequel, while the other half (possibly the dominant one) says to leave it to my imagination.

Adding to favorites!

Ah... poor Mayura...

So shocked and thrilled to get a date and then they just don't seem to be able to come together. If he's going to keep interfering, it's about time he got up off his duff and gave her a substitute date, isn't it?

BAD LOKI! NO DOUGHNUT!

I really loved this. Very well written.

OMG so cute! I wish you would make more chapters! I wanna know what happens next! PLEASE!?

Loki...

You're one *smooth* criminal.

LoL, what a conniving little boy. I love how you wrote this oneshot out, and I wish I could read more of it. Alas, it stands wonderfully alone, and I loved it. Great job!

AH!
loved it
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very funny n_n/

kisus

YAY!

It's really spectacular, even if it's just the first chapter! I hope you write more because it's the story I most adore. Thanks for your work, and I'll try to cut the rhyme quirks.

I don't know what is to be undecided about... I rather liked this fic. Very cute. I like that you protrayed the characters as they should be, keeping them in character. I could see Loki doing that. ^_^ Which makes this story all the more better.