Though you based it on Episode 129, the story was still original and creative. The kids were cute, and I like the character interactions.

yay! I love Ryosaku fics. :D I enjoyed your story very much.

OMG!! That was SO CUTE! Yeah!! I SO loved that episode!! And it seemed like Konomi-sensei was trying to make it look obvious by making Rinko's hair brown like Sakuno's.. Heheh!! i loved it!! I hope you write more!! You rock!!