Interesting Story! I would love to read the rest!

This is sso promising. You have seriously tickled my interest!

I hope you´ll update soon. I love it!

Poor Hermione! She's right, 21 is to young. I hope things work out for her.
~Chip

I hope you get a chance to update soon, this is great!

Man, Ron gets on my nerves! You've written him exactly the way I imagine him to be though, so nice job... Hermione seems a little confused as towards her feelings toward him though, I understand if she doesn't want to show her apprehention, but when you are writing as though in her head, her true feelings could be made slightly clearer, or perhaps the confusion is what you're going for, in which case, that should also be cleared up. Now, it looks like one minute she hates him and the next she wants to jump him! I liked the little detail about his "feminine lips" and how Hermione couldn't pull herself away from them... methinks I see some foreshadowing!! I am interested in seeing where this leads, and finding out more about Mme Pince, also - what was she doing in Minerva's office, when Minerva wasn't there? Unless, was she actually killed in the office, or in the library and then moved?

I liked that scene, especially Hermione's sort of dislike of Ron. Please update.

loved the 2´end chapter, and ron is a bastert I like it.
can´t wait for more :o)

Love it so far! Can't wait to read more! Kisses*

strange that in her condition, they're only practically married. i don' see the weasley family not pushing the matter.
strange too for hermione to be pregant. she is more organised than that.

Very nice chapter! Can´t wait to read what happens next, so please update soon!

I have to admit that after reading the first chapter I was slightly skeptical - for a romance, it was an odd chapter, especially considering that neither Hermione nor Minerva was in it. However, after reading your second chapter, I have to change my original opinion. I am very interested to see where this story goes. I love the fact that Hermione is returning to Hogwarts, I've always felt that she really would have, plus you made Ron a prick, which is an added bonus! I actually didn't notice too many spelling/grammatical errors... One thing that did stand out, when a character is speaking and there is narration before the sentence finishes, the comma goes before the quotation mark. For example: "No, she can't," Ron said...

Oh thank you for this! I was in desperate need of a good story and you delivered. I have no clue were this is going which is not a bad thing. I'm looking foward to being surprise by the next update soon.

xox, xio

interesting chapter update soon please

I can't wait to see where you take this! Hope for an update soon! Kisses*