 kismetindy 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Love it!! House's feelings towards Wilson expressed in poem-form. You're very talented.
Cannot wait until your next story begins! |
 chowrie 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Ah beautiful!
I feel so sorry for House. Not for the limp, the pain or the addiction. It's this I feel most sorry for him: "Tomorrow I resume the mask and greet another day, One more coward’s compromise and one more price to pay." Not having the courage to say what he feels for fear of losing the one thing he wants, he needs. |
 Tidwell 2007-08-15 . chapter 1One poem lovelier than the next. You are quite a talent, B. In lesser hands a poem such as this would be mawkish, overly sentimental and to put it bluntly...crap. Not so here. Every line is a gem. You capture House's reluctant acceptance of need for another person so well.
I would love to read more of these wonderful sweetmeats :) |
 Fyrerayne 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Fangirls everywhere are squeeing. Lovely m'dear. Are they like a series of little poems?
I cannot wait for your next story. Is it of the slash variety? Or is it more of a friend fic?
Hmm, if you have the time would you care checking out my House one-shots? They're posted but I'm sort of squeamish about if I got the characters right. But you don't have to. Just thought I'd ask someone who totally gets the characters.
-ANimal |
 HOUSEM.D.FanForever 2007-08-15 . chapter 1great job!! :)
God and peace
Vanessa :) |
 chaoskir 2007-08-15 . chapter 1*gasp* *speechless thinking about a whirlstorm-author with a wonderful and great emphatetically kind of writing awesome and moving stuff*. Our both heros are FRIENDS and LOVERS and I really love to think about them in that way. Especially when one of a friend of my is able to write something gorgeous poem like that. Betz you are wonderful! |
 peacefrog formerly boysdontcry 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Another good poem :D |
 HouseAddict16 2007-08-15 . chapter 1Great one! Love how you manipulate words great work! |