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Reviews for: It Happens
JadedGothButterfly
2008-11-08 . chapter 1
That Was Heart-Breaking.And So True.Very Angsty.Lovely Writing.I Don't Mind Sakura Bashing,Really. *Evil Grin*
Ibtihaj
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Dude you can go on bashing Sakura all you want i doubt anyone would mind... heh :)
Good story
pinktangie
2007-12-09 . chapter 1
Even though I don't like Sakura when she is trying to get Sasuke and hit Naruto. You did your best not to bash her.

I respect that!
Arianna Cross
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
XD Very sweet in a bittersweet sort of way.

I think it would've been very interesting if Kishimoto made a full circle of a love square heehee. Hinata -> Naruto -> Sakura -> Sasuke -> Hinata. It would be a very interesting show to watch. Hehe.
DoodleNoodle-no-baka
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
Yo, it's me, the former, DoodleNoodle-no-baka! (I changed my pen name)

Ahem, even though this fic was made like, 7 months ago, it's still better than something I would write. I'm so terrible with angst, it's practically laughable. Come to think of it, I have a couple of fics, unfinished, that I never bothered with and they are terrible, like some 12 year-old wrote it.

Anywho, this is angsty, and I like angst (even though I'm terrible at it). Fluffy? Not so much. Fluff and angst are a hard combination to write, after all. But, you write so much better now, so any mistakes you made can be overlooked. After all, it's in the past, right? From those mistakes, you improved for the better.

I, too, may have grown up (phisycally), but my mentality simply refuses to.
Dishawne aka Shawny
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
oh wow, this is seriously deep. I LUV IT! hinata's awesome! this wasn't bad at all! u should be ashamed of urself for thinking such lies...lol. ur personal review at the bottom had me dying from laughter dred, say 'get my lazy ** in gear and correct it'
Dark Sunshine of Hell
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
o.o
mummble
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
wow...is it just me or is the feel of this raw? I like it.
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