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| ChasingStarlight 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abusebeautiful and well written. |
| Rachel 2007-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful story, and an interesting way of constructing the tale. I thought every entry was spot on -- not whitewashing Snape, but never losing sight of the suffering person he was and the loving heart he carried even in the days when he gave in to his own darkest impulses. Well done! |
| BananaXPancakes 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really good. I like how you portrayed Snape as being gentle underneath, & how attached to Lily he was. Original idea, like it a lot, well done. |
| duj 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseGood work. I don't think you've noticed, though, that Snape is a very gentle man, despite his sarcasm. He seems not to have directly killed anyone but Dumbledore - at once a mercy-killing and a forced-move in a war - and we see in HBP how he treats a mortal enemy: Peter, who not only helped bully him all through school but who also betrayed his one love. Lots of carping and bossing around, but nothing anywhere near commensurate with the wrongs Peter had done him. |
| stop and go 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abusevery original story, considering all the recent lily/snape stories cropping up. it was lovely. great job! |