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| Jack and Audrey lover 2008-06-22 ch 6, | abuseGreat story so far! please post more soon |
| ae1102 2008-02-12 ch 5, | abusegreat story i cant wait to read more |
| BrittanyLS 2008-02-09 ch 6, | abuseLove that Jack and Audrey are together!! |
| BrittanyLS 2008-01-13 ch 5, | abuseI love this!! Jack and Audrey are perfect together!! |
| JaxsLady 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. I love that Audrey and Jack understand each other's ordeal..I am looking forward to reading more of this story. Please keep writing. |
| JaxsLady 2007-09-08 ch 3, | abuseThis story is showing promise. It is well edited and it moves along at a good pace. The writer has a good writing style, which makes the story much easier to read. My only complaint would be that Chapter 1 & Chapter 2 were rather short. Given that you write well, I am convinced that you are able to writes chapters of a good length. Otherwise, I am enjoying this story. Good work!! |
| lmcloves24 2007-09-06 ch 3, | abuseSo cute! I love it! Please continue. |
| BrittanyLS 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseI love that Jack is the one who can get her back!! Please update soon! |