Oh my gosh, I ADORE this story. Despite Shion ending up with Allen. I completely agree on how the game kind of hints that they like each other for more than friends. I was noticing it throughout the whole series, especially in the third game when he became so overprotective of her. I can't wait to read more of your work.

I never really gave this pairing any thought before, but I love what you did with it. The story was great.

I love the way you did this. It was really well done! And never went overboard or anything.

Jr/Shion is

wowowowowowow Junior's so smooth. =o Such a manwhore. XD And oh-so-sexy with that personality.

Nice job on the first chapter!

Hooray for Jr. and Shion smut! xD Anyway, I'm reviewing, just like I said I would. Aren't I wonderful? Of course I am. =P So, I just wanted to say that I liked this. It was good, and you kept everyone in character, just like you always do. Good work!

I did skim, but I think this was very well written, chibi-sai. You did fine with everyone. Jr. was talking a lot worse than usual, but he was spot on and it made sense. Sorry I can't leave a more detailed review due to skimming tho'.