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Reviews for: Naruto: The Twelve
Shashuko the Paisley Maiden
2007-11-13 . chapter 4
Naruto has relatives...? Let's meey them! Please update soon :)
Shashuko the Paisley Maiden
2007-10-14 . chapter 3
YAY! You updated! *hugs* I love it when people update! (gets hit with a rock for stating the obvious)

That sent-through-tiem justu is AWESOME, by the way. You get squee points!
Studebaker1960
2007-10-12 . chapter 3
please review soon!
Shashuko the Paisley Maiden
2007-09-20 . chapter 2
ne? NE? ANKO?!?

wha's going on, tell me...

please update soon! I'll alert this!
Thanos The Artic Wolf
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
Sweet story cant wait for the next chapter
kishi.tenshi
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
some corrections:
effected - affected
aloud - allowed
atempt - attempt
uzimaki - Uzumaki
colleages - colleagues
mentiion - mention
blaiming - blaming
--probably, it would be better if you put quotation marks on some of the conversations of the caharacters


well that's it, though I know that these mispelled words are intentional. Hope you're not offended.
FYI - I also recieve this kinds of reviews, and I take it seriously by doing my best on writing the next chapter.

--again, please don't be offended,a nd I hope you'll get well soon!
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