whoa!

i really lov this one!!

i'm a complete Kakashi-Kurenai fan and i find this one really great!

good job!

all i can say is short... imo i think Kakashi was stronger than Asuma. the whole story itself was interesting. ill say that much. some things didnt make sense, but its alright... thats why its called fanfiction right? :D

it was an interesting story anyways...

4/5

dont stop writing fics.

Asuma isn't strong enough or talented enough to kill Kakashi. The ending killed the story.

NICE!

your welcome for the help!!

and very good chapter... i didn't see many mistakes, but i'm also not the best editor... btw what is your first language?

I'm right here and thanks!!

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