soooooooooo scary i couldnt tear my eyes away!

wow

Liked the story, one thing I wanted to say. "Incubus" is the male one. "Succubus" is the female one :)

Amazing. Is it weird that Bellatrix seems to be my fav. hp character, also loved your pansy/luna :P. x

amazing

WOW this was AWESOME and more awesome than awesome, even more awesome than the previous stuff I labelled as awesome, and I just can't find words...

ooh *shivers*

That was dark, dark, dark.

I think I will have Bellatrix nightmares tonight!

I just love the line: "You're at my mercy now: scream for me"

You really conveyed a good, dark feeling here. I'm oddly fascinated by this pairing and how tragic every story with these two seems to be.

Sad. Intriguing and well-posed, but I almost don't like it just because of what happens to lovely Luna.

I can't even put into words how AMAZING this is.

I think this is my all-time favorite fic.

And now I ship Bella/Luna...

But really, this is absolutely great!

I love it. It's great.

Good story, I liked it! You did justice to Bellatrix and made her rightfully evil. I just wanted to tell you that an Incubus is the male sex demon, if you are speaking of Bellatrix you might want to say Succubus which is the female sex demon. Just because... when I saw Incubus my mind went straight to penis and men, not evil sadistic hot witch Death Eaters :D

Okay so I was trying to find some femmeslash with Luna and I thought "what other character would the story work with"? Some Slytherin girl perhaps, but there's not a lot of those. Ginny/Luna... I dunno... Ginny's too much into guys. But hey, who knows?

So then I think, Bellatrix! Luna was prisoner, and obviously Bella had been one of the captors. So this was sorta the thing I was looking for and expected. But still... it was unexpected. Very realistic unlike so many of the torture/capture fics out there. Bella's very in character. And this is probably how Luna would see the whole thing.

And the last bit, I mean it was expected that she'd ask her the question, but I didn't expect the answer for some reason. I think Bella would probably be more terrifying than Voldy cuz she just seems insane and bloodthirsty.

Awesome fic.

What the?...

It was very well written,very dark...very disturbing

wow!

awesome!

That was great! When I saw a story about Luna and Bellatrix, two of my favorite characters, I had to read it and I'm really glad I did. I think you showcased both of the characters really well: Bellatrix who relishes in torturing others, and Luna who uses imaginary fantasies to cope with pain. Until now, I've never realized just how much of a foil the two women are for each other. Both are portrayed throughout the books as being a big "loony" for lack of a better word. With Bellatrix, she's "mad" and her insanity has only made her more dangerous and evil, fueling her hatred. But for Luna, it's the exact opposite. Her strangeness makes her funny, friendly, likable, and completely unbiased. Your story showed this sharp contrast very well. And I loved the running theme of nightmares, especially the ending. Awesome job!