loved it! though i'm maybe slightly only a very little bit confused... lol. :) you're always so very polite in your author's note. thanks for writing! ^^

shirlynn
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Hilarious.

that was long. haha. and too much rumors.Ü off to read more!

(reviewing as i read again)

LOLOL. i can just SEE tachibana's face (OMFG whatthehellaretheydoingtomybabysister?!?!!) poor, porr tezuka...he's pretty much the center of everything and doesn't even know it...as per usual. XD

omfg. lol barrage of random crap.

XDD LOL totally forgot bout josei. XD a battle called "clearance sales"? XD nice.

also, i can SO see atobe as a future evil dictator. except one that no one ever takes seriously. XD

lol. i bet when everyone's trying to tackle tezuka, all he's thinking is wtfhowdoigetoutofthisone?

...and there he goes.

ya, my FAVORITE quote of all time?:Tezuka blinked at him, wondering why his rivals, all top tennis players of the finest caliber at that, were meeting in the mall like it was totally normal. And why was he the only one who had not known about this? How did he miss it? When had he let his guard down…?

XD dentist appointment...? oh, and where'd chitose go? and i loled at "dibs on tezuka". XD like he's a bag of chips or something.

haha, polite sweet yukimura staring down atobe..XD i'd PAY to see that!


and poor, poor yuuta...that must have REALLY come as a shock...i'm pretty sure he doesn't want to hear about his bro's love life...XD...and noe it's his turn to save his brother's life. XD

AHA!AHAHAHAHAHA! so inui's IS the troublemaker! XD

poor, poor tezuka. and yuuta.


PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

XD

*SNORTS WITH LAUGHTER*.


OMFG. I LOVE THIS STORY.

(i wanna see a kentarou and kin-chan face off! XD)

LOLOL. does anyone even KNOW what a "battle" entails? XD

and i love how the seigoku kouhai are taking the battle so SERIOUSLY...XD

man, but seriously, i would LOOVE to have a guerrilla war at the mall...that would be HILARIOUS.

LOL. i can see everyone face going "WTF!?!?!?" when yukimura comes...XD...and i bet tezuka's going to have to clean up after all of them...

HOT DAMN!! the mall's turned into an all-out meelee~!! and everyone is stil "WTF"ing over rikkaidai. XD

atobe makes me lol my head off. XD love him!

lol. everytime someone says, "hey, isn't that shitenhouji?", i get the feeling that the rest of the team is going, "dudeWTF?"

and kintarou...is just kintarou. enough said. XD

(reviewing as i read...)

LOLOL. it took me a minute to firgure out who "agent talk-a-lot" was...until you said "munble"...XD than i started cracking up so hard!

XD

(and i could SO see kamio with an eyepatch...lol - it'd be even funnier if the eyepatch was over the eye that was uncovered by his emo-hair...XD i think then he could be legally registered as "blind")

and i love how the rokakku coach keeps voluntarily offering random people money...XD you don't even have to beat him up for it!LOLOLOLOL. i just LOVE the random interspersed moments with rokkaku's coach..XD

and momo makes me l.o.l. (so does inui, cause he's evil)


also, i could SOO see all the tennis teams hacing a giant meelee in the middle of a mall and later being thrown out..XD HAHAHAAHA! love this story!

OMFG LOLOL man, fuji and his cacti...*shakes head* LOLOLLOLOLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.

+faved. (for fuji and his cacti. and inui, troublemaker that he is.:))

OMFG. this fis is AMAZING. i think if they wrote soap operas like this, more people would actually watch them. XD and just for atobe, this was awesome. (i don't usually like him, but the way you characterized him and his "ore-sama" was just "XD")

XD

ya. ESPECIALLY the ending. XD

Nice, update soon!

Oh gosh.

I loved this. *_* Gossip is bad, myo~

(I'm supposed to be "sleeping" now and because of this making me laugh, I almost blew my cover. D;)

LMAO. That was hecka funny! It is a bit confusing, though, since so many things are happening and the many point of view switches.
Oh, and yeah I do read the chapter title(s). They're pretty interesting.

Poor, poor An. She has bad luck, that girl. And Tezuka enters - finally! And everyone tries to figure out WHAT is going on (and failing, I might add)
Funny, funny, funny. I loved it. Thank you =D *gives cookies* (By the way, sorry for the short review, but it's like one AM here and I'm feeling like a zombie =P)

Oh poor Tezuka, Tachibana and the girls are oblivious. This chapter can be summed up in one word:

WHAT?

These tennis-crazy boys are very creative, ne? I can't believe they could go so moronic. An sleeping with Fuji, and Sakuno too. Wahahahaha. That got me. Sakuno and Tomoka are still oblivious I wonder how the girls will react after they know everything. I was really waiting for this, glad that you updated! ^^ I conclude that POT bishies, despite their hotness, are scatter-brained.. ^^ Hope to read another chapter soon.. ^^