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laurzabeth
2007-08-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, I just love your Ron and Hermione. They were wonderfully canon with that smallest dash of fanon...dumfounded!Ron and sailormouth!Hermione...brilliant. Great idea for a story, too.
griffindor-girl12
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseaw so sweet!
RunForTheHills
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThat was very good.I like how you took a scene that wasn't looked at in much depth in the book.I always wondered what they were talking about...I guess now we know!The paranoid thoughts Ron was having were great, it made it seem more realistic.Nice job!

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