Reviews for THAT'S MY FATHER

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Megan Consoer 2008-07-10 ch 7,	abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
KaraSays 2008-03-12 ch 7,	abuseit's a very intresting story! i hope you continue. i would of never thought of this
JaceDamian23 2008-02-11 ch 7,	abuse"I decided , I don't want to stay here," she took a handful of floo, and tossed it on the grown, only to appear inside another room, she didn't recognize. "WHAT THE F-" Draco, who had went back to his room, sometimes while Hermione gave his dad a piece of her mind, jumped a mile when the girl appeared in his room, while he was changing, he put his shirt over his head, and glared at her, "This is not your room, get out mudlood." "Call her Mudblood one more time, and I will mute you son," Lucious was at the doorway, he looked at the girl, "Come now, I will show you to your room." ugh this part confused me hun. because draco was downstairs or whereever the fire place was with lucius. then hermione tried to floo away and ended up in dracos room. and now you are saying he is taking off his shirt in his bedroom and she just appeared there and lucius is at dracos door? lol. makes no sence at all. Lucius. and Draco were standing at the bottom of the stairs, he looked at his son, "Think she said yes?" He laughed, at his own joke. Draco noticed that Hermione's mascara was running, he secretly waved his wand in her direction, causing the make up to look good as new before the other guest could see, he noticed his father smiling at him, "We wouldn't want the Malfoy's to look bad, right? That is what your saying, if one person in the family looks bad, then the rest of us look bad." Lucius wrapped an arm around his son, "Thank's son." Draco was surprised by his father public affection, but smiled, "Anything for you father." aw cute part "I wish I wasn't the only girl in this house, it could get so boring." Lucius smiled at his daughter, "How would you, and your Draco like to go shopping tomorrow?" Draco looked at his sister, and smirked, "You wish for a girl to hang out with, and our father offers for me to hang out with you," he looked at his dad, "Father, you don't need to make me into the daughter you never had, anymore, because you have one now." Hermione laughed, as she joined her father on the couch, "Lu', I was trying to get you to suggest that I invite a friend over to the house," she looked at Draco, "Because brother dear, over there has a crush on one of my friends." "Oh yes, Ginny Weasley, if I am not mistalken," He stared at his son, and then at his daughter, "You could invite anyone, but her." "Dad?!" Both siblings whined in unison. Lucius laughed at his childrens united outburst, he looked at his daughter, "I was only kidding dear, I wanted to see the reaction from my son," haha funny aw that have the same birthday? cool hmm so hermione is narcissas mother...and she wa supposed to be voldys queen..hmm interesting. very. thought she looks nothing like draco. poor Hermione! but how can her father whom raised her work at hogwarts if he's a muggle? "M, the monkey has my wand?" Hermione said still asleep snorts Hermione kissed her fathers cheek, and turned to look at a still-sleeping brother, she rolled her eyes, "I do not know how we all managed to sleep in one bed, the first real thing we did as a family," she laughed. "Yeah, just don't tell anyone, otherwise my reputation is ruined," Draco said, slowly waking from his sleep lmfao "It took me a whole year before I had the perfect name for my last cat." lol the name she picked seems like a males name though “Hm?” Hermione stirred in her sleep, “I told you the monkey broke the lamp in the Great hall.” “Mione, sweetie,” Lucius bent down, so his face was next to hers, “We need to wake up now, so we could get Ginny.” “Tell the monkey,” Hermione turned her face away from the sound of the voice, and rested her sleeping head on her fiancé‘s shoulder. Severus woke up, when he felt the young girls head on his shoulder, then he noticed Lucius on the other side of her, “We must had fallen asleep,” he looked at his friend confused, “What are you doing down here?” Lucius smiled, “Well incase you forgot, I own this house, plus this child of mine wasn’t in her room, so I came down here to see if I could find her, and here she is,” he gently shook his daughters shoulder. “Not tonight Severus,” Hermione made an annoyed sleepy expression. Lucius stared at his friend, questioningly, “Is she always this hard to wake up, and I don’t even want to know why my daughter was saying ‘not tonight’ to you lmfao funny as hell The father, and daughter appeared in two different parts of the Burrow, the girl appearing by the lake, and Lucius by the front door. Hermione rolled her eyes, and took off running to her father, she was laughing, “Sorry, I always picture that lake, when I apperate to the Burrow.” “I usually imagine the front door,” Lucius wrapped an arm around his daughter shoulder lol “I’m in the theater room, come up!” Severus’s voice was heard from upstairs. “You’re not being a very good host!” Hermione shouted back, not moving from her spot. lol "Ginny, you don't know where his mouth has been?" Hermione, holding her fiancee's hand came in to the room, and caught the two, she was laughing. lol “Draco no!” Ginny was heard shouting. “Don’t be sore, just because I got it in the first try, Gin,” Draco was talking loudly. Severus, afraid of what might be happening in the room, hurried to where the shouting was coming from, he gave a sigh of relief when he saw the two playing a game of ‘Ski Ball’, he looked at the two teens, “You’re playing ski ball, that was what-“ he stopped himself, he looked at his godson, “Call you parents, and tell them you will be home tomorrow morning..” “Where is Hermione?” Ginny got the disc into the slot, “I got a point.” “That is not fair, I was talking to my godfather,” Draco shook his head, “You sure you aren’t a Slytherin.” lmfao "I think I am going to get the Cheese Enchalada," Both Draco, and Hermione said in unison, then laughed, "That was scarry," they both broke into another fit of laughter, and tried to get a seriouse expression, "That's enough, stop it Draco/Hermion." "Twins," Ginny rolled her eyes, at the two sibling, "Fred and George, they always talk in unison without meaning to." lol cute story. i love it. though lucius and servous are way to nice but its okay there cute
Anarane Anwamane 2008-02-04 ch 7,	abusewonderful story
takerschick 2008-01-28 ch 7,	abusewow please update as soon. i love this story its very different. please updatae soon.
MistressAnime 2007-10-14 ch 7,	abusewhile i was waiting anxiously for this chapter, the beginning was a bit, alright, very confusing. u might wanna edit that before adding a new chapter. all in all it was amusing. keep up the good work.
Heidi191976 2007-10-14 ch 7,	abuseExcellent. I loved the part about Disneyland. I actually laughed while reading this. Poor Severus, being compared to Captain Hook. I can't wait to read more.
MistressAnime 2007-09-18 ch 6,	abusejust great! bravo! update soon pls!
Grace Antares Whitlock-Hale 2007-09-07 ch 4,	abuseI myself have the flute solo to Don Juan, I am first chair , the best at my school. I learned to play the particular pieace in an hour. I really like your story so far!
fantoallwritertonone 2007-09-04 ch 6,	abuseWow very nice
nana 2007-08-30 ch 6, anon.	abusetwo words...this sucks
HarmonyJen9000 2007-08-26 ch 6,	abusePLEASE WRITE CHAPTER 7 ALREADY. PLEASE!
Mia Vandutchess 2007-08-25 ch 5,	abuseaw...I love stories like this! Continue~!
Heidi191976 2007-08-25 ch 5,	abuseI enjoyed this chapter. I am glad that Ginny was fine staying with the Malfoy's. I like the fact that Hermione kept her pregnancy hidden. She probably would have gotten into it with the Granger's. Lucky for her she is not their daughter. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please continue.
Lazaria 2007-08-24 ch 4,	abuse"Give me ONE squawk if your a MALE, or TWO squawks if your a GIRL, that will help me decide on what to call you." The owl squawked TWICE.P.S: What do you think of the owl? HIS name is Don Juan. What's wrong with these sentences? I can tell you 2 hoots was a female NOT male I think you need 2 fix something sweety=) Other than that I really do like the story line"If I didn't I wouldn't have kept reading it!"The plot while not new is still one I find enjoyable. Keep it up!;~)

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