nice teaser

I wish you update this. It was getting interesting and the cliff hanger is killing me.

Mou... I still wanna read more of this story! Please update! *pouts*

VERY good story! I can't believe its only now getting to the substantive part! I also see it's been years since you've updated. Do I ever hope this is one of those rare stories subject to a sudden resurrection.

I wonder what or who those five BIG auras were? My first guess, since this is an OMG cross, is that they are demond who run the corporation. The thief's crack about intruders dieing seems to bear this out. My second guess is that they are top level martial artists much like Ranma. They've made at least seem of the discoveries Ranma has (the holy grail of the Art as Tofu put it) and they have become practically immortal, beyond even Cologne and Happi.

I do hope I find out if I'm right some day. In other words, let your muse loose again!

Thanks!

Hopefuly this fic is not totaly dead. The basic idea is pretty sound, and you spent a lot of time building it up. To much to just leave it before the real plot happens. Ranma and Urd are in lust with eachother, Akane and Ranma are almost getting along better? Ranma devloped a pretty cool new technique, ranma improved the dimensional folding of hidden weapons? Ranma is even an avatar of chaos? So the real question is, what does all this mean, where is it going. Sadly after such a great build up it is disapointing to see this fic sit there for years without an update.

Incredible, simply incredible. Please continue. Ciao

It has been a while. Don't you want to update? The fic is so good (though the Urd contrivances are a little offputting).,

This is another fun story, although it's noticable that you improved since you wrote this. Don't worry too much about your English, it's nearly flawless. Several of the japanese words differ a bit from the spellings you usually see in stories, but it's only mildly distracting.

How important a role are the Goddesses going to have in this story? Are they only cameo appearances or will they appear more? What is the deal with the office building and the super-powered people? And the infiltrator?

Do keep this on hold in favor of 'Chaos Factor', though. I'm looking forward to more of your writings!


Quizer

GAH
update you rat bastard this is torture I wanna know what happens next.
please I'm dying.
Ahem Jolly Good story old hap, carry on

NO... continue!

Hey! I like it! DAmn cliffhangers! In any case, you should try to update soon. people are waiting, man. people are waiting. Seriously, though, I like your style. you can keep me interested.

update soon!

It should be a crime for somebody to write such good fiction and then leave a teaser for three years.

im guessing that this is a dead fic seeing as you have not updated in three years. pity, its a good one.

Awesome story, just found it and I want more. It looks like it has been three years since you updated. Could you please give us a little more.