Camaleao 2008-09-11 . chapter 1i'm absolutely crazy about one-sided fanfictions =] that was very great. I like the way the end got...endless [and the way you compare Ichigo's lips with summer, and Ishida's lips with frozen winter.]
maybe a continuation or another fanfiction telling more about Uryu's feelings about Kurosaki would be great! |
kiiroi yumetobu 2008-04-22 . chapter 1omg! ur so mean! how could you end it like that?? *sobbing* |
Suicidal-Valentine-Rose 2008-02-21 . chapter 1Okay, I'm personally not a yaoi fan and I don't support this pairing what-so-ever, but I have to say I'm impressed. This was a truly beautiful piece and I'm glad I happened to stumble upon it. You captured Ishida's character perfectly. The imagery and link between love and hate was very clever. The imagery, the style of writing...everything was just amazing. I love how you made the contrasts between Ichigo and Ishida's personalities stand out like the seasons. Well...I guess I'm going on a bit, but I'm favouriting this and I hope to read more from you soon. ^_^ |
LavenderShell 2007-12-29 . chapter 1Aw...
i think u should make another chapter! ^_^
This is really cute, yet it was sad... |
VelvetNightmare13 2007-11-03 . chapter 1That was a really cute fic. ^__^
A lil' creepy on Uryuus part but still very cute.
Very well written, nice work! XD |
SpiceChaiPrincessOfDoom 2007-11-02 . chapter 1I loved the way that Ichigo could taste Uryu after he was gone, and that they both had different tastes. Awesome story! |
Samurai5725 2007-10-24 . chapter 1This was really good. I think it's perfect as is or with an addition. =D Are you going to continue this? I would love it if you did. ^^ |
Anonymous fangirl 2007-09-15 . chapter 1 OMG THAT WAS GREAT! Please, please, PLEASE keep writing! Your style had me so hooked and the language you use is just amazing. You could be an author, no problem. I look forward to more of this fabulous story. |
txgirl123 2007-09-08 . chapter 1Ever thought of extending this chappie? Very well written! I loved reading it. |
TheAngelOfLucifer 2007-09-07 . chapter 1Aww! That's so cute :) Although, the summary makes it sound worse than it is... ¬.¬ Which was a nice suprise :) I'm not really into citrus XD
Poor Ishida... :( Kubo Tite should actually make him gay... XD |
OtakuLady 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Please, please, please! You can't just leave it like this! PLEASE! If reviews are traded in for chapters, then can I trade this one in for another chapter on this story?! PLEASE?! Anyway, really good writing, I like the sense of sadness in Uryuu's pov. Thanks, and keep up the good work! |
TTfanTT 2007-08-22 . chapter 1um...that was...ok i guess...it was pretty...thats hard to say realy...i have no clue |
shy7cat 2007-08-21 . chapter 1GLEE~! You portrayed Uryuu-chan in a splendid and most enjoyable way and I wuv you for making the first Bleach fanfic I've ever read memorable and wonderful and something I want to see bloom into something amazing! Thank you so much for writing and posting this. Wa! I wanna see what happens next so bad! I just can't seem to properly convey just what it is I liked about this fic. Maybe it was its realism? The way Uryuu's feelings were conveyed. Maybe its your style. Or maybe its simply the fact that Ichigo likes Uryuu-chan, who hates Ichigo in return. Whatever it is, thanks again! |
kaesaku 2007-08-20 . chapter 1ooh~
nice, nice.
'hope there's a sequel.
a happier ending would be appreciated. :) |
Toujiko 2007-08-19 . chapter 1Wah! XD I hate these sort of endings...not when they're good like this but everyone usually wants to see an ending where they "live happily ever after." Bleh. I don't know...usually on one-shots I don't mind but you're threatening more chapters and all I can say is--
DO IT. O_O |