Good start. I wish you would update so I could find out if the plot is any good :P Beautifully written - it made me want to know what's going to happen! The only beef I've got with it is the following:
"They say what doesn’t kill you, will only make you stronger. There right."

"There" should be "They're". That's the only spelling/grammatical error I found, though. Please continue!
I'd love to find out where this is headed!

Keep writing,
Lorah

That was really short but pretty good. Definately keep writing. Let me know when you have the next chapter (if you already did, I'm going to feel really stupid, lol).

good start to the fic
cant wait for more chapters
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hey this sounds great! :) check out my walk to remeber fic.