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Reviews For: One Fatal Mistake - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

ListeningtoJonas
2008-04-15
ch 3,
abuseI am shocked. Seriously. This story actually made me think i was actually there.
ListeningtoJonas
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseI just found thisn but the first chapter almost made me cry. This is so sad. I will read the rest of it
ClarkR
2008-01-27
ch 8,
abuseThis story is really touching, it made me cry a little, tears filled my eyes. You're a really talented writter, and I would encourage you to write more!
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 6,
abusei understand I think story would have been good no matter which way you decided to take it
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 5,
abusethat was very good I liked the cliff hanger at the end
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 4,
abuseoh suspense! you're a really good writer but maybe try making the chapters longer.
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 3,
abusewow that was so intense I was almost crying
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 2,
abuseoh I can predict whats going to happen but I won't...I want to read it!
DarkAngel814
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abusethat was intense really good though
fireplant
2007-11-18
ch 7,
abusebut where is the doctor who was walking with cody? "I'm still on chapter 7 so i don't know what's going on yet", anyways, good story!
Andrew321
2007-10-20
ch 15,
abuseI hope this review makes you happy because I really mean it. This is such a great story that I just HAD to keep reading to find out what happened next. This story is not like any other story and it actually made me cry a few times (which is hard for any story to actually make me cry at all.)You are a very great writer! I loved this story so much!
Zack-Cody-Dylan-Cole
2007-10-17
ch 15,
abuseAw, nice ending.
xCole-and-Dylan-rockx
2007-10-17
ch 15,
abusei luved it! it was a sad story! i cant believe cody and london got married!! wow, i wasnt expecting that. That was nice that they called their little kids zachary and madeline after zack and maddie! that was a really nice ending to an awesome story!!

luved it!
Ilovetradgities
2007-10-17
ch 15,
abuseSEQUAL! PLEASE, LOVE THISCHAP WAS AESOME, SO SWET LOVES IT BYE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL
x- The Older Twin -x
2007-10-17
ch 15,
abuseAw, that was so sweet!! I love it!!
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