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| ListeningtoJonas 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseI am shocked. Seriously. This story actually made me think i was actually there. |
| ListeningtoJonas 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI just found thisn but the first chapter almost made me cry. This is so sad. I will read the rest of it |
| ClarkR 2008-01-27 ch 8, | abuseThis story is really touching, it made me cry a little, tears filled my eyes. You're a really talented writter, and I would encourage you to write more! |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 6, | abusei understand I think story would have been good no matter which way you decided to take it |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 5, | abusethat was very good I liked the cliff hanger at the end |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 4, | abuseoh suspense! you're a really good writer but maybe try making the chapters longer. |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 3, | abusewow that was so intense I was almost crying |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 2, | abuseoh I can predict whats going to happen but I won't...I want to read it! |
| DarkAngel814 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusethat was intense really good though |
| fireplant 2007-11-18 ch 7, | abusebut where is the doctor who was walking with cody? "I'm still on chapter 7 so i don't know what's going on yet", anyways, good story! |
| Andrew321 2007-10-20 ch 15, | abuseI hope this review makes you happy because I really mean it. This is such a great story that I just HAD to keep reading to find out what happened next. This story is not like any other story and it actually made me cry a few times (which is hard for any story to actually make me cry at all.)You are a very great writer! I loved this story so much! |
| Zack-Cody-Dylan-Cole 2007-10-17 ch 15, | abuseAw, nice ending. |
| xCole-and-Dylan-rockx 2007-10-17 ch 15, | abusei luved it! it was a sad story! i cant believe cody and london got married!! wow, i wasnt expecting that. That was nice that they called their little kids zachary and madeline after zack and maddie! that was a really nice ending to an awesome story!! luved it! |
| Ilovetradgities 2007-10-17 ch 15, | abuseSEQUAL! PLEASE, LOVE THISCHAP WAS AESOME, SO SWET LOVES IT BYE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL |
| x- The Older Twin -x 2007-10-17 ch 15, | abuseAw, that was so sweet!! I love it!! |