 elenaequalslight 2010-01-06 . chapter 14Hurray! Progress with Kyo! Hurray! Plus, Yuki and her together are perfect! Good job! |
 terriisamazing 2010-01-05 . chapter 14this. is. amazing. one of the better fruits basket stories i have read in a long time...and i mean long time. X3 kyo is just a big softie isnt he? and Yuki is just a big furball of angst cuteness...if that makes sense. I think your character is *hides from tohru fans* better than tohru to be honest...i dunno maybe its because i kinda hate tohru...but anyway i really like minna and everything in this story so...KUDOS TO YOU. i hope you update soon.
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 elenaequalslight 2010-01-05 . chapter 1This completely cracked me up. I can't wait to read more. |
 kk or art can go boom 2010-01-04 . chapter 14Aww Kyo and his hidden kindness. With Yuki and Kyo wanting to sit next to Minna (verbally expressed on Yuki's part) I wonder what will happen at the movies, that and possibly an explosive reaction on Kaguras part! Yay for future updates! |
 RainbowsAreRare 2009-09-30 . chapter 13I love it! Come on, you've got to write more.
In my eyes, this chapter wasn't all that short. It had something I found quite important in it! so, please, continue writing!! |
 kk or art can go boom 2009-08-04 . chapter 13Aww I want a sailor bunny too. Do they actually have that at build a bear workshop? Does Minna have an admirer(Or three)? I wonder how diner will go?
Try to update soon please! I really love this story! |
 Lilly-Anne 2009-08-04 . chapter 13 So, I saw this had been updated and I'm like 'Summer with the Sohma's.. I know I've read that one. Which one is that?' I open it up and I'm like "OMG THIS IS THE ONE I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR YOU TO UPDATE!" I loveth this story so very much. I need to re-read it. Anyway great update! I laughed so hard when they found Haru in Build a bear. That was funny. Anyway update agian soon please. I love this story (One of my faves ever!). |
 Lady.Miraculous 2009-07-21 . chapter 4Everything was really well set up for this chapter - I know it's hard to manage all of the Sohma's. Shigure and Ayame were kind of cut out of the beach scene, but they weren't really needed and it was only something I noticed at the end.
I like that Kyo and Yuki have the extreme hate relationship that they have in the beginning of the books that was BT - Before Tohru and not the slightly less hate that was AT - After Tohru.
Besides a couple of grammar problems that every writer has - it was a very well written chapter that I enjoyed a lot. |
 Lady.Miraculous 2009-07-21 . chapter 3Haha - Okay, first I loved the interaction with the characters. My favorite part was with Hiro and Kisa, it was perfect. Hiro totally is whipped and I love that you had Minna mention it. So far I really like Minna's attention. Everyone has an intuition and if I was in her spot, I'd probably be worried about Yuki too and wondering if we had a dead body in our main guest room or something with the way everyone is acting. It's perfectly reasonable for her to be wondering what the heck is going on.
Some of the things I noticed that distracted me from the story was, chat speak again when Minna was talking to Julie and a plethora of explanation marks with Momiji. Now, the kid is always excited, but I'd find ways to show his feelings without all of this !
I really enjoyed this chapter though and I'm looking forward to the next one. |
 disneytiger 2009-07-09 . chapter 12Okay. I'm a new reviewer, but I do have to say, that this story kicks major butt.
I love the characters. It's amazing.
Can't wait until the next chapter. |
 Lillt-Anne 2009-07-09 . chapter 12 OMG I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE! You don't know how much I am enjoying this story. It's sweet and emotional and funny all at the same time which convinces me you captured the spirit of Fruits Basket. |
 D-Fan 2009-07-09 . chapter 12 I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! This story is so good! please keep updating ^_^ |
 Lady.Miraculous 2009-07-07 . chapter 2I really liked that you began to dive into the relationship between Akito and Yuki, and the rest of the zodiac. One of the things that I noticed, and I'm not sure if it was on accident or not, was chat speak in the story during Minna's thoughts. I'm not sure if it's hard having so many of Minna's thoughts in one chapter or not. In the type of perspective your writing it, it's probably necessary.
Oh, and I do not think Minna is like Tohru, yet. I haven't a great sense of her personality except that she takes on guilt when it's not her fault and she's a rather good hostess to keep her wits about her with so many people ;). |
 KuroiTsuki7 2009-07-07 . chapter 12kya! I agree! that conversation was much needed!! great job! um... is it safe to say that minna and yuki'll have some romance in the near future? and will there be a chapter that gives some background info on minna's past? I'm curious to know. those two seem so similar! I APPROVE! great job on this! keep up the great work and please see this story to the end!! I love it!! update soon! :D |
 RainbowsAreRare 2009-07-07 . chapter 12Happy Happy Love Love!
More, if you could.
BababaBaBa. I'm lovin' it! XD |