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| ReaderADV 2008-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseNice... "Ash Ketchum form Pallet Town"? I think 'form' is supposed to be 'from'... Update soon, or death will greet you with nasty big pointy teeth... |
| Simoman 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseReally nice work so far. Update soon! |
| darkaura1214 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abuseyou totaly need to keep writing it is so good please write some more soon from may |
| LuciferIX 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThe only problem with rewriting the entire story in the same title that you did the first one is that people won't be able to review your chapters again. But onto my review, and to get the critiques out of the way all I really saw that needed to be changed were a few spelling errors. I'm actually surprised that I haven't seen this one until now. That definitly shows that May has been waiting for the moment of Ash finishing the Sinnoh league for a while. Now just to see if Ash will remember his side of the promise. Although it would be hard to forget something like that if it was truly how he felt. A nice chapter, I hope to see the next one up soon. Keep the updates coming! |
| KnightSoul 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuse1) You forgot to put the "C" in "VOLT TACKLE"... 2) Good luck with the remake! |
| It's Called A Life. Get One... 2008-05-01 ch 13, | abuseLove the Fameshipping! (Dawn and Max) |
| It's Called A Life. Get One... 2008-05-01 ch 4, | abuseStaleport? Lol. Love the story. |
| oniaisuryu 2007-09-06 ch 13, | abusetight story i loved it i like the part when ash was supposed to be dead but wasn't yeah i like how set that up well anyway i'mb gonna start reading the 'luthian adventures' story asap peace |
| viderx 2007-09-04 ch 12, | abuseSorry about the review at chapter 13 that was wrong what I meant was: I cant wait for the sequel my brother took over cuz my mum wanted me to go on an errand |
| zeaeevee 2007-09-03 ch 13, | abusethis story was so AWESOME and the ending piece was soo... ...KAWAII! you did an AWESOME job on this fic now i CANT WAIT for the sequel!! ^_^ |
| Wolfofdoom 2007-09-03 ch 13, | abuseNice can't ait to see how this goes. |
| Mikee1 2007-09-03 ch 13, | abuseWow, great ending to an awesome fic. Can't wait for the sequel. |
| mayloverxxx 2007-09-03 ch 13, | abuseaw. cute story! can't wait for the sequel!^^ |
| zeaeevee 2007-09-03 ch 12, | abuseaww... this was such a SWEET chapter your story gets more and more interesting with every chapter so i got nothing to say for when you write up the sequel. |
| viderx 2007-09-03 ch 13, | abuseIt was really awesome, I cant wait for the next chapter. UPDATE SOON! |