NO! Not Ellen! Wow. Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

your just finishing the story there?!
like a super cliffie or something!?
lol well it was good up until the end, felt alittle rushed, maybe an epilogue would help it out a little if you ever get round to writing one
i liked the idea, pretty original, there were some greta botherly bantering moments too.
i think you would benefit from a beta too :)

Good story! update soon! and what's wrong with Sammy?

plezz update soon its getting good

I'm really curious to know how this story gonna work out.
Update soon cuz this do sound interesting.