Questions about # 10, #31..I really don't get it. Can you explain..please and thank you.

i have1 word for this fic: aw.

Hmm. That was really good. Brilliant. :D

My favorite:

21) Denial

He knew he didn’t like Raven because he still loved Terra; he just hated all the guys she danced with because they didn’t deserve the privilege.

Wow...that's all I can say...wow. You have left me speechless and I applaude you.

35) Empathy

Terra would never have understood what it was like to have a Beast within, but Raven did, all too well.

*blink* *long, long pause* that's my favorite, right there. a double entendre. love those. er, well, at least i see it like that. *grin* see ya around. oh yeah, loved this piece to pieces.

those are all extremely beautiful and insightful.

This is really nice. I am definitely faving this.

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Hey-a lot of thoes really really inspired me! Would it be at all possible for me to maybe borrow them to write a story? I'd totally give you all the props for the insperation and the sentence. I particularly loved #47 No One. If you are willing to consider it pllease email me at not just ignore me please! 0/0
Anyway, fabulas!

Very good stuff here. Excellent job with all the sentences.

Keep the good writing.