yay you updated!
and you even fixed the summary :)

As far as this chapter goes, it's a pretty good combat scene, which you do very well.

What I wonder is what a Spec Ops team is doing mixing with normal infantry Elites, seeing as how the two roles are somewhat separate.

I also question the time period, given the shields and the Brutes, but I guess I'm guilty of artistic license as well... Makes for a good story.

Hmm... started where I left off about a year ago.

I'm not sure what you need to work on. Your dialogue is pretty good, as is your descriptions of combat scenes. I can see why I picked this story up all that time ago.

i think you might get more hits and reviews if you change the summary to something that actually describes the plot of the story. just maybe :)

I really do like this story. I can't say specifically why but I've read A LOT of fanfiction (most novel quality or better, like Joe's Hero Trilogy and nonjon's works) and this is pretty good. I'd really like to see another update.

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I like how your SPARTANS aren't portrayed as perfect soldiers in terms of respecting rank no matter what (Michael) and I also liked how Logan became the leader of the group.

uum Lyn is rediculously bloodthirsty. IM NOT THAT MUCH OF A HEATHEN!

Hey, this story started out a little rough, but you really hit your stride around chapter four and it's just been getting better and better since! There is a lot of mystery and some great characters here, and I can't wait to read more.

Oh, for some reason you forgot to break up a couple of lines of dialogue in one of the chapters, blocking them all together... it's probably just an editing thing, but it does make that dialogue (and it's pretty critical dialogue!) hard to read.

Nice chapter, nice scene with the phalanx thing.

I hope you would shed some light on what happened to the other Spartans in later chapters. I'm pretty eager in finding out how they died, if they died.

Keep up the updates!

oh i just wanna dump this all over my whole body its just so hot. what am i gonna do with all this water...

lol i dont even wanna know how lyn learned to do that to a ghost, that was awesome!

... Man, my high score is only... Two Grunts, and two Elites. Wait, I beat Greg's Elite kill score. And matched his high score! Yeah!

Wow, this entire story is awesome. The action scenes are intense, over the top, but not enough to make it seem too crazy, SPARTANs would actually be able to do it. The dialog is great, I love the humor, yet there is also very good character developement. I love the Back to the Future Referance with the AI. I can't wait to see what happens when they are able to reach the Forerunner Structure. I want to read ahead, but I can't! The only way for us to keep reading is for you to keep writing! So keep up the good work!

Very good.
But I had trouble following the dialog at the beginning of the chapter.
Keep up the good work!

Your first chapter was so-so and didn't really interest me, but I'm glad I kept reading. The action is mind blowing and I can't wait to actually find out what that ring is (I have some ideas).