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| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-04-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease update this one . i love it |
| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-02-21 ch 2,  | abuse*gasp* kitty has been very helpful if you ask me - but u didnt so ill shut up |
| luv me xoxo gossipgal 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseHOLEY - LOL DO THYE STILL O WAIT YES THEYY STILL HAVE TO LISTEN TO HER |
| catey 2008-01-02 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love this story. You have a fun writing style. I sort of hate that Coach Boomer made Kitty a sidekick, and I think she should go, "What!?", phase through the floor, stick her hand up under coach boomer and pull him down so that he gets stuck in the floor. That would either set him straight, or get her a detention. Either way it would be kinda awesome. Anywho keep up the good work, this story has really great potential. |
| The One 2007-11-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved it. Please, keep updating! |
| CSI Aly 2007-09-11 ch 2, | abusehey coach boomer is the type to be mean... lol. im betting he put kitty in sidekick, no offence. =] hope you update soon! |
| Allen Pitt 2007-09-11 ch 2, | abuseyes, the coach doing the power evaluations is idiotic-Kitty's power is subtle, but much more powerful than most-she can not just phase, but 'air walk' (walk on air) also phase someone else through with her, also phase someone or thing into an object & leave them there, etc... she's best with a team, of course as a scout etc--it's not all fistfights. Storm might just get angry at all this. Heh. lightning bolts, storm winds inside the building, rapid temp & air pressure changes. ouch. |
| CSI Aly 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOOH WOW THIS SOUNDS SO GOOD! please update soon! |
| Allen Pitt 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseSo... Storm's method of checking out an anomaly is to fly into and see what happens? Yikes... but what the hey-Storm is certainly very very powerful, should come as a real shock to the school - * When Magneto etc come through, also back to 17? That would be very weird--he would likely be a lot more powerful too... * There was a story sequence years ago in the X-Men comics where Storm was regressed to childhood, maybe 12 or 13; still had all her memories but her power was erratic, 'just coming in' etc--she teamed up with Rogue... |