I really thought your depiction of young Aeris was beautiful. There's certainly some shining quality to her character, besides her infamous death and being part-Cetra. Ifalna's depiction was great too.

I can see how and why Tseng started to become fascinated with her.

This is very beautiful...I love Tseng's character, and he appears so rarely in fanfiction...and Tseng/Aerith is a pairing I am very fond of. You've done a wonderful job with his character, and showing the compassion he felt towards her :)

Wow. That was great... really.

And now you should write on about his work or what could happen between them years later.

^^

An interesting take on the whole Tseng obsession (ha ... that makes it sound bad ...) with Aerith. I knew Tseng had a soft spot, who knew if we didn't have these precious hints that it was Aerith?

Crazy and very sweet.