This story is Gothic novel-esque, which is cool. You do tend to use prepositions oddly, however, such as "my voice shaking of the anger". It interrupts the flow of the writing. Also, labeling the flashback as such does the same thing. Perhaps you could italicize the flashback? Besides these two things this story is intriguing and I can tell Robyn is a character with a lot of layers. Keep writing, and please read and review my story. Thanks!