PLEASE finish this story! I just recently read the Kingdom Keepers 1&2 books and I LOVE trhe way you use that style for your own version of the story...
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter...
GOD BLESS!
Hikari no Minerva

yeah its good when r u gonna finish it though

Whoa...CLIFFIE! PLEASE keep writing! I NEED to know what happens! AAH!!

OMG, I love your story so much! I just love how you are pulling everything together. But Alice isn't a princess, that is the only downside. Who wanted Finn's help? I need to read the next part!

Amazing you should write your own stories and I know at least one person who would buy that book. ME! You are a fantastic writter.

Love it. I was intruiged by the fact that he heard screaming.

Love it but thats only chapter 1 now to read the rest

Very good. I like long chapters. Keep writing!

Wow! This is really good! You haven't updated in a long time though! Please do!

Amazing. Positively Clever. I have no critisicism to give, whether constructive or not. None at all. Your story was that good. Great! Update soon, please. I loved it!

It is a very good story, I read it along time ago and I want to know what happen next since you have started this story, I am very keen to read what happens next

I loved the Kingdom Keepers book. This is a nice spin off as well. I can't wait for the rest, but it's so late at night... I'll try to remember to read this tomorrow.

Thanks for the ride!

this was amazing yoou have to write more!
the only coment i have is Fin dosnt use sarcasm inthe books!

This is an AWESOME story! PLEZE! update soon!

Awesome! Update son!