So what happens next?

I LOVE IT! keep up the good work!

stop being stupid finish the story sometimes people read your story and dont review cause there to lazy please please i am despret

keep it up i really like it so far

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! You have to update soon. I WANT TO READ MORE!! XD. It was awsome so PLEASE! update as soon as you can :) please and thank you.

This was so cool,i want more

yeah that was wicked i liked it alot it was awsome to read i rekon u should have like almos what happend with kikiyou except they trust each other so much that they ont fall for it but u should make a cliff hanger where it looks like they did that would be so awsome kk love ya lolzas i say that alot to anyone realy kk bye bye

why do you need so many reviews! That was really short! Only 1 more chapter to go! Or is it?

I love it so far!

Argh! Update! I really hope this is the fifth review, or else I'll review another 4 times myself! Oh yeah, if you need help with spelling, grammar, or other technical stuff, I'm your beta!

Alpha

i think its a really good starting and it sounds like a really good storie. One thing i would try to work on is to try to make the chapters a little longer.

I really like this story.I hope you update very soon.if you have any more story's please email me.thanks if you do.

good story and i hope u update

i love your story so please put five more chapters up as soon as you can. i know not to pressure you because i to am a writer, i dont write internet storys but i am working on a story (on paper)about a hanyou girl named kamy and her friends dame-the cute boy,
minla-the dragon and sky-the caterpillar.the story is named HOLLOW(hanyou). bey.

that wuz really good you should update soon! :-)