Wow that was preaty cool.

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I liked it I thought it was really cool

You wrot a very got start to your story Forgiven (Read it and Weep) But you left it on a clif hanger you shoul realy writ a sequel I would of said a nother chaper but you ened it there. This is only a opinon so if you don't want to i undersand. just remember there are not a lot of Read it and Weep fantics - e

Your story wasn't really a story. You just kind of... there was no plot. It was cliche, not only in concept but in word choice. This isn't a fic, it's barely worthy of being a paragraph.

Aww, cute! I love Jamie/Connor! Cute fic.

kinda short...

Harmony and Lindsay were her friends, not Alexandra

Aww, I liked it. Short and sweet. :)

-Annie.