I agree with Fosterchild...it was very powerful. And very realistic. I love how Steve compares his present self to Two-Bit's past...Clever. Two-Bit was pretty in character, but I am impressed at how well you nailed Steve's character.

That was powerful. I've never seen such a great dynamic between Two-Bit and Steve. It was an original idea.
Good job!

a good one

That was a good one-shot. Poor Steve, I feel bad for him.

:) that was a really good onehot Sarahh.

Dang. That was good. Update soon!

oh baby! Steve is one messed up dude, i feel so bad for Two-Bit he's just trying to help, and Steve's like "hey, well...uhh go ** yourself." lol jk. but i like that Two-Bit's sober and happy and trying to get things right! love this you capture Steve's alcohol/drug induced state of mind very well!! please post more soon and i would love it if you showed how POny and Darry are doing too.

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