Such a great idea, Jasper collecting everyone's good feelings and sending to Edward to help him stop. Sad that it sets up for her birthday disaster, with Jasper getting a whiff of her blood. Hadn't thought about that possibility.

that was amazing!
it suited jaspers character perfectley!

I thought this was really good but in some places more description is needed. there is not much talk of how they killed James and how they burned down the Ballet studio. i also thought some of the original speech should of been put in there, e.g when Bella talks about the fire being gone. over all this was a really good attempt and you should definitely write more. i myself have done this chapter in Jasper's perspective too and it is very similar but in many ways it is different too.

Interesting insight into Jasper and a good lead-in to New Moon's events!

awww cute story great job-haleena-

aww, i liked the ending. this is a really good look inside the mind of jasper Hale!

Aww! That was adorable! Aren't you totally proud of amazing review? LOL great job.

This one touched my heart.

very good! keeps writing forever!

Ah, don't frett Jasper, you'll get there soon!

Alice and Jasper's relationship is so special :). I think you did a terrific job with describing Jasper's thirst.

This was sweet. I loved how true you stayed to the characters and the storyline.

I just loved this absolutely loved it. you should be very proud, youre so talented a writer!

Wow. The symbiosis between Edward and Jasper is brilliant and palpable and very touching. Thanks for posting this! (And, again, I'm sorry for spamming you!)

i liked this story, well thought out