I've liked the whole story so far and can't wait for the next chapter. One of the best Chrono Trigger fanfics keep up the good work. Not much I can think of to improve on. One thing that surprised me is that more then 3 entered the time portal and they weren't sent to the End of Time. Might want to find a way to explain that.

Interesting story, but I have to say some of the story aspects get to me, such as the ChronoxLucca, and Marle realizing she is ¨royalty¨ bit, that to me seemed so odd, given that is pretty contrary to what the character was, but hey, I understand you wanted to do a different pairing. The chapters are too short I believe also. Regardless of those problems, I am still enjoying this fic, and hope you get back to it soon.

Cmon Reviewers, please review this wonderfull story: I like the descriptive scens like when Chrono went back n time.

The only thing is Robo can't make a mental note it's a data log he would do since he is a robot. One thing confusing: Was Magus near the last village when he went to that cave to cast the vison o matic spell?

In the game I am at the part where Chrono died and I can't find Death PK for the love of God, which is lots. x:) (hard hat for Death Pk in case of falling rocks/landslides/avalanches.

So far, I glean that there will be some conflict between Marle and Lucca. Hmm.

I think Lucca could win a straight fight, but Marle is sneaky; you can never count her out.

Crono in a hypnotic state, and then a new guy named Hypnotico: coincidence?

The prologue felt a little rushed, but the story itself has nicer pacing and enough description that I don't feel like I'm reading about a bunch of talking heads, in contrast with a lot of stories on the internet. I think I'll keep reading.

I noticed it was updated...
I like it!
Did you actually beat the game?
I just thought you might include the part about Lavos actually creating the magical humans...
I thought that was cool.
Come to think of it...
Never mind.

Xenier

great so far update soon

And they are off on another adventure! Cannot wait to read that!

This chapter reminds me of when they first set off upon their adventures. Hypnotico along for the nest journey as well! I cannot wait to see what era they go to first! How about 12, 0 A.D? A new Land of Magic! Sorry got carried away there! I'm now tempted to write my own Chrono Trigger fic! Good job so far!

Here I am, at your request.

Now, down to business.
I am impressed. I usually can come up with great storyline, but I can't keep up with people who just have descriptive ability. You are a great writer, but...uh oh, no complaints.

I'll keep an eye out for updates.

Frog Lady is correct about this fiction! I love this game, I still play it on my PS1, even after 10 years! You have Lucca's personality down perfectly! Robo was great. Please continue this. Hopefully with time, you will get the reviews you so richly merit.

This is an interesting story. I am very surprised no one seem to be reviewing because it is very well-written and you deserve more.

The development of setting and characters is much better than the average fanfiction. I especially love the romance between Crono and Lucca and how you made a character for Crono even though you don't make him talk. You may have the occasional grammatical error (e.g. excepted istead of accepted or lies instead of lay) but again, better than fanfiction standards.

I hope to see you write more of this.