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Joviper54
2009-10-05 . chapter 25
glad you fianlly updated
great add
looking forward to more
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KityKat-1
2009-10-04 . chapter 25
Randy and John are cracking me up, and that Andy is just a wee bit emotional isn't she. Hahahaha.

Please update soon. I can't wait to see Shane get his comeupens!
HappyasHell
2009-10-03 . chapter 25
Welcome Back! Great chapter. Maybe Andy can punt Shane instead of Randy. That would be a riot!

And as far as who would win, I think John would be more fun, but Randy more sincere and romantic!
lizzy-beth-lizzy
2009-10-03 . chapter 25
Poor Andy having to watch Randy kiss Stephanie. At least Randy didn't like it (lol). I'm gald he didn't punt her.

Thanks for the update. PLease update again soon.
Kennedy2006
2009-10-03 . chapter 25
Yay an update. And Randy gets to punt Shane! I'm suprised though that Andy is kind of protecting the McMahon kids. I can understand her standing up for Stephanie though. Even though Stephanie has been behind some of all this.
JackieC98
2009-10-03 . chapter 25
We'll take an update anyway we get it! (lol).

I'm just glad Randy didn't punt Stephanie.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Ronon'sRascal78
2009-08-01 . chapter 24
Oh wow, this is seriously awesome! I love this story! Wonderful writing!

Cant wait for another chapter!!

Suzi
Joviper54
2009-08-01 . chapter 24
just finished reading hun
its great
please add more soon
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lizzy-beth-lizzy
2009-07-18 . chapter 24
Loved it. Can't wait read next chapter and find out who Andy is going to talk to. Hopefully Stephanie. Even though I like Randy and he's just doing what he's told, I don't want to see her get hurt!
HappyasHell
2009-07-18 . chapter 24
Oh no! I don't want Stephanie to get punted! Funny how Stephanie is the one being set up. I bet Shane went running to daddy and blamed everything on her. Shane deserves some pay back for his part in every thing too. He is way more a manipulative bastard and it wouldn't suprise me if he used his looks and charms to try and get on the good graces of Andy now that she basicaly has him by the balls.
Kennedy2006
2009-07-18 . chapter 24
I love the part where Andy was putting baby oil on Randy. Lucky girl and what a cute couple.

And if Stephanie has to endure a punt, I hope Shane gets much worse!
JackieC98
2009-07-18 . chapter 24
Poor Stephanie. I know she's suppossed to be the "bad guy" but she's just too hard to hate. I'd rather see Shane get the punt. He's nothing but a snake.
hhhaddict91
2009-06-23 . chapter 23
oh, snap! i LOVE this story.
every vignette with shane and steph, i just picture them sitting around, smoking cigars in a dimly lit room, plotting their next escapade, like in the old movies.
AMAZING!
and i love andy. she's great.
can't wait to read more!
Kennedy2006
2009-06-04 . chapter 23
Great chapter. And hopefully Andy won't hurt Stephanie. I just have a hard time hating her. But I'd love to see what she does with Shane (lol). This is such a good story. Keep it up and update as soon as you can 'kay?
lizzy-beth-lizzy
2009-06-04 . chapter 23
I loved this chapter. Randy totally cracks me up. I love the character you are writing for him (and John), because it seems more like how he would be in real life. I've only met him once and he really is a very down to earth kind of guy.

Oh yeah and one b*tch down (Sean), one to go (Shane)!
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