Woo hoo! Maya for president! (I don't think I would vote for her...)

Everyone was so in character in this; especially Gallows. I like how you had him being protective of Virginia and the scene with Malik and Melody; I loved it!

Seeing this story updated so quickly really made my day. ^_^

That was such an intense scene. I knew you were worried about this chapter, but it came out really well. I love the thought that you put into the plot with all of the theories in it and stuff. This story keeps on getting more and more complex and intellegent.

I loved the scene with Malik making a mess out of Leehalt's home. That scene made me laugh.

I can really see Virginia worrying about passing on her knowledge. I thought that this chapter was wonderful!

Oh, so it looks like something's going to happen in Ballack Rise. I'm really exited for chapter five!

You really did a good job on explaining Malik's new temperment with this chapter.

So it looks like Virginia and Co are begining to figure it all out...

I love how you added the whole "who can I trust" issue to the story; it makes it even cooler. This was such a nice suprise to read upon comming home. ^^

it has been a awesome story so far, Im not that much of a story person since my reading skills suck but this kept me interested, cant wait to see more :D

I really like this story so far, I don't know the game it's from but you've written this piece really well. I am glad there is a second chapter to read on. Hope you keep up the great job Full Neko! :D

Oh, so Clive isn't Clive? This is getting really cool! Makes me wonder what the Prophets are trying to do. Speaking of, they were very in character.

This story is really good! I can't wait to see what happens!

Hm, my crew and I are very interested in this story! :D

I truly hope you update, this looks very interesting!!

~Fran

I really like this story so far. As you already know, I love your idea.

You portrayed the Prophets wonderfully in this story, I like how you brought them back for this fic.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter; I'm curiouse to see where the story goes.