I LOVE PEIN X KONAN!! Pein X Konan was created for those few people out there who need some love in their life. Wait...that came out wrong. *ahem* For those few people who don't have enough love in their life. That's better. BECAUSE PEIN X KONAN IS LOVE!

Pretty good.
I certainly like how you described the scenery in the story, it was quite poetic.. nyuu

YES! MY POINT! PPL NEED 2 WRITE MORE OF THESE! THEY ROCK!

Just great. I loved it

I really liked it!

I didn't see any grammar mistakes. And I loved this! It was so Pein and Blue! Their whole "communicating without words" thing is exquisite. You described this very well - simply, without over-complicating things, but still with enough depth to pull a reader in. Great job! And I agree, we need more PeinBlue fic,. especially non-oneshots. I recently started one, but I'm not sure how it's turning out...anyway, awesome work, you're talented. :)

Amazing story! I think you did a really good job with their interaction. Netiehr of them were to far from the way they are in the few chapters they're in. You'rer right, there really need to be more fics about this couple. Keep up the good work, and maybe write aome more about Pein and the girl, too. I'd love to read them.

Short but sweet at the same time. I loved it. PeinBlue does need more fics. Hopefully when more comes out about them in the manga this will happen. ^.^ Nice work.

pein blue is hot enough to bake a cake. good fic

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Gorgeous. Not quite "it", but close enough. I look forward to seeing more of your work! Best of luck in the contest!

Ah, you're a SasuSaku fan too? Our order is the same, then. :-)

Very intriguing. I actually managed to not get lost through the story (that's a huge feat, by the way) and enjoyed the concept.

There were grammer mistakes, but what story doesn't? And there isn't much character development in Pein or Blue, so OOC-ness can't exactly count to a point.

- Lise -

nice

TANK YOU.
I shall enter this right away.