One word: HOT!

What is the sequel called?

I see that this story was updated in 1907, well I still had to come by and thank you, this story was well written. I wished I was here on this fanfiction then, but I just found the site about a week ago. So, take care and thanks again for this great story. I'm just sorry that it was only three chapters.

Sheliaee

I'm satisfied now so you did VERY well! Can't wait for your next one. Keep up the great writing work!

"I'm not jealous...I'm just..." Jealous

Haha. I'm simply IN LOVE with this story! I love all of your EC stories actually.

You are fantastic at writing them!

What's the name of the sequel because this one ROCKS! Amazing... I absolutely loved that Eric taught Cal the difference between sex and making love... too important a difference to let pass between a pair that relies so much on trust! Great work!

HERE IS YOUR DAMN REVEIW!

No, I'm just kidding, I really really really love this story!

Ashley Lynn

Omg! I can't believe you have never written M before! Your really good you must not be a virgin if you are I give you bigger props. You should definetly make more. Are you going to if yes then when? Reply please

Hey Jodie,

So I’ve actually sat down to read this chapter, actually I’ve re-read the first 2 again and there’s no doubt in my mind that is probably one of my favorite stories of yours. *Hence why it’s being favorited* :D.

And I’m sitting here with my 3rd mango margarita of the night (which is totally inappropriate on a school night but meh…) I promise the first one was just to calm my nerves (that sounds stupid) but I've never really read any smut or porny fics before and you know what? I still haven't.

This was really, really well written, and was obviously about the love between Calleigh and Eric, you captured it brilliantly, without going over the top. I like the POV changes as well, it make the story less I dunno the word I mean, well what I mean is it's like it's more real, less like someone is watching and telling the story, more like it's just Calleigh and Eric alone together they way it should be. And Eric being all thoughful and cute “Cal, do you wanna… be… Umm. On top… Or?” I stammer' - aww :)

This is beautiful too:

-“Only when you have an amazing woman behind you.”

“Beside me, Calleigh.” And she always has been. I feel another rush of emotion fill my body and I pull her closer.-

It's so true that Eric sees her as his equal and it's sweet and just what every girl wishes for really isn't it.

Congrats on a brilliant story, I'm glad I finally read it all. And if you're writing a sequel for this I will be the *first* one to read it :D

LeAnne xx

So, gal ... you want *me* to write smut. Ha, you're doing fine on your own. No need to add to that imagination of yours. Feel free to pep up my stories though. I feel like I could never do as good as you. And then I'll end up writing bad smut, not a good idea. I'll give you something though, not sure what, but much ec love. :-)

JJ

WOW ...and WOW ...and WOW ...

as you see coherent speech is not an option after such a hot story.

i loved it ...it was well written and hot as hell ...

hey u made a slasher fall in love with a het story ...feel proud :D

luv ya girl,

oana

I'm glad I started reading this :) It's brilliant.

I like how it wasn't too rushed and they actually talked before the kiss.

LeAnne x

Wow..Eric's mad, and I love it :)

Poor Calleigh though I just want to give her a hug.

The part with Eric and Natalia was really nice at the end too, it kept Eric in character.

LeAnne x

Hey,

You asked me to read this and tell you what I thought, honestly. So that's what I intend to do.

You almost lost me with the first chapter, the formatting thing, which I realize now was just a funky little error, and the fact that it just seemed so odd to me. I don't know CSI Miami very well at all, I can barely even give face to name here so I may not know what I'm talking about at all. Anayway...Eric seemed out of character and it made me kinda not want to keep going. I'm glad I did, though, because it was great. After Calleigh left and Eric had the chat with Natalia I was hooked and coudln't wait for the next chapter.

Everything after the point you had me hooked was amazing. And that's saying something from someone who is still pretty much a Miami virgin. I mean, I'm not completely unaware of Miaminess, but yeah. I think I would have read and enjoyed this one, even if I didn't have a single clue as to what was going on.

You've got a great thing here, even the 0.0 parts were really well written. So.. yeah... you did great.

It's a fantastic story, honestly.

that was... wow...amazing i loved it ]