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blackraven615
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
... I teared up. That was beautiful.
MissMadameMina
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
Short but sweet, I almost cried...but I'm in a public library it'll be really awkward. Great piece!
DoodleNoodle-no-baka
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
Ah, it was very touching indeed. I've been up since 6 a.m. watching the Naruto Hundo Marathon, but since they were basically reruns, I decided to check my mail and saw the link to your drabble.

It. Is. Not. Pointless!

In fact, this drabble was, indeed, touching *sniff* Sadly, it reminded me of what a bastard my father was and how he was a far cry from being paternal...

Oh, well. That's what mommies do. Power to the mommies! 'Specially my mom.

Hm, I wonder who the daddy is? Guess I'll leave that to my imagination, right?
Trini Naruto Lover
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
lol. certainly she might!
GimmeFanFiction
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
who's the father though?

ack! anyway it was a very cute drabble, a little dark though. hinata's paranoid!
Dark Sunshine of Hell
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
This was good. I can see where Hinata is coming from. Is she the Clan Head then? Because she worries so...the boy must be the heir, ne?

More paternal Hinata!
insanity
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
yatta! who's the father by the way?
reader
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
ooh...! hinata's protective!
tch
2007-08-16 . chapter 1
this touched me. good going!
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