a good sense of the first war, and the order... poor gideon, marlene, and edgar... sad, especially knowing they die..
one quabble... from moody's description, the mckinnons all die only two weeks after the picture is taken- so the impression given is that marlene dies before the prewetts, but regardless of little canon-bits with the timeline that lily's letter in dh confused me further on anyways, good job. i always enjoy reading a story about the 1st order- they fascinate me- and clearly, you too. :)
keep writing!